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Jul 21, 2019
This poem is part of the contest:

July Pleasures

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SAND COVERED RECOLLECTION (July Contest)

The sun shone down unbearably
on the July southern beach.
There was nowhere that I'd rather be
than with my love in easy reach.

The teeny boppers all strolled by
as near nude as the laws allow
(yes, I watched with hooded eye
I wasn't old as I am now.)

But every time my gaze came back
to my wife right there next to me
with her eyes closed while on her back
there where the land married the sea.

All this two short decades ago.
We'd play in the surf and swim
while she'd laugh with skin aglow.
Even then they's say "is she with Him?"

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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lovedly

Stan trying to save the cash of the prize
JUDGE
FIRST IS THIS
though I don't count syllables
ask jess

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You are still a winner in many eyes,
Yours as always,
Ian