Even a boy the size of a thumb
With a brain as big as a pastry crumb
Wasn't as meager or as dumb
As the men who tried to capitalize on his oddity
Use his unique condition as commodity
After getting a bit of their gold
Thumbling simply escaped
Into a mouse hole
Apr 12, 2019
Thumbling
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Based on a Grimm fairytale
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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