rational thought
a geometry of flatulence
a poem is metaphor
I can kill you in a poem
and walk away scot free
so bend over
I got a gun in your ass
ready aim bang
I love you
rational thought
a geometry of flatulence
a poem is metaphor
I can kill you in a poem
and walk away scot free
so bend over
I got a gun in your ass
ready aim bang
I love you
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Comments
Love it...
Short, sweet and to the point.
~ Geezer.
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:)
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Well done
Short and to the point. Just funny. In that very good sadistic way! Perfect
Thank you Mark Really
Thank you Mark Really appreciated!!
Best Z