In Wonderland

My heart was pounding
given choice of
paper boat or balloons.
I jumped into the boat
grabbing balloons as sails.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

hmmm

hmmm
interesting write
it makes me think

thanks IRiz ..appreciate your

thanks IRiz ..appreciate your visit...good to know it made you think...i may be tweaking it up a bit...
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thanks April for your

thanks April for your visiting this page...yes, this is about fantasy and thrill...grabbing the opportunity when it knocks on the door..
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