The caterpillar contains the butterfly
The tadpole the frog
The monkey the man
My DNA is still unfolding
I wonder where I'll be
A million words from now
Oct 02, 2018
Unfolding
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Greg
expand on this thought