lovedly
lovedly
Aug 15, 2018

All Falls

Ringa ringa roses etc
then all fall down
so do all kids

then we have Niagara
Falls
and
when guys grow bigger
night falls
and
when we fall out of love
everything crashes
and
falls

Kings fall
Queens fall
indiscreet women fall
stray guys fall
lovers and cheaters fall

what is this life for
if all are subject to
only
FALLS

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

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raj

6 years 8 months ago

liked the multiple falls you captured in this poem...however there is another side "rise" so it's not apt to say that everything falls in this world...
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lovedly

does rise as we learn with our woody bodies
but then all rises also
mostly end up in falls
either by corruption or interference
no one lets a risen one fly high and say
O help in his demise
ere he alone does rise
thanks for the immediate surprise
I take it as a prize

R

raj

6 years 8 months ago

as you wanted me to do...here is my attempt to have a one liner for "fall"

F a l l is relatively the lowest point in a cycle from where to rise, like from ocean to clouds
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