A new star was born
Traveled through the birth canal
Nova Skye arrived
Jul 19, 2018
A star is born Senyru
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Congrats my sixth grandchild is born 8 lbs 13 ounces Shortly after nine am
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara very nice Senryu..
Barbara very nice Senryu...the line "travelled through the birth canal" captured my attention...
suggestion: would "arrived" be a good replacement to "is here"
Congratulation to the grandma and parents of the newborn
Wishing Nova Skye the very best in life..
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Thanks
She a blessing and arrived does sound better