Senryu # 1

flint stone sparks a fire
alabaster form sculptures
I check my wish list -

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Absolutely

Awesome.
I espicially like the last line, though each line is a gem of its own.

thanks Rula for the read and

thanks Rula for the read and inspiring comment. You got it spot on..the third line holds a lot of abstract..

good to see you back after a recess of few days..now waiting for you to post your piece..have you read the Blog of IRiz?
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