surfing
amidst clouds
ready to bolt
diving
with torrents
uplifting mood
skiing
on rapids
icing on cake
Jun 07, 2018
Bubblescope [Sunku]
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
nice title! i thought the
nice title! i thought the "icing on cake" line was really funny, too. this one is really playful.
Good to know you liked the
Good to know you liked the title "Bubblescope" and the footage in Sunku form....I hope you also noticed first words of each stanza and read in between lines which would hel comprehend the end line "icing on cake"...
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