I swam throughout her ocean,
had to fight her undertow;
her waves became my friend,
more than anyone could know.
Familiar with her coastline,
I've walked along her beach;
I tried to possess her heart, and mind;
both were out of reach.
Her air was so inviting,
I was dancing in her wind;
we grew, and were relating,
and, the thrill was if we'd sinned!
I so, enjoyed her ocean,
but, things just weren't meant to be;
that's the end of my education,
I've only memories.....of her sea.
Comments
I know...
..of course, you're right.....but, to never wander THAT beach, again...well, it's soooo difficult, right now. But, this was my excercise in, "closure".....
thanx,
doc.
Of course you're right.
Just can't trust that "undertow".
Thanx, Amalzamani...
..I changed the one line "back", but I didn't understand your comment about using, "mere".
sincerely,
doc.
Thanx, Bee....
...and how ironic! Your example was exactly how I had it, then I changed it. I think I'll change it, back.
later,
doc.