I hid a note
underneath my shelf yesterday,
it's in my throat,
stuck on all the things I'm scared to say.
Apr 18, 2018
they say to right what you feel...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
short and sweet
with delightful irony at the end
I liked this...
very much! I do believe that the use of the word [right] was purposeful and was meant to say, that one should try to [right] the wrongs of the world?
But be careful!
~ Geezer.
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