IRiz
IRiz
Mar 05, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Morning

sleepy
blue heron
on Green Lake

feathers
trembling stems
dull winter wind

clearing
their throats
crows bark like dogs

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Washington DC, USA

Favorite Poets: Matsuo Bashō

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Comments

Rula

Rula

7 years 1 month ago

another piece with great imagery and not without some humor. The last few lines make me smile.
Thank you for sharing.

R

raj

7 years 1 month ago

I echo Rula's comment.. "cows barking like dogs".had me laughing ...this Sunku tells me that you are having lots of fun....keep it going IRiz...
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