Would you care to create
a brief poetry
on the lines of above
very brief
BREVITY
must convey freely
ADD your piece here only
if you wish
Lovedly 77 nearly + &_
eg of a Lovedlu
O passer by
we came, bye
adoration why!
she loved
sweetness
tasting lips
a demon came
plucked her away
they both vanished
under covered
darkness
all norms abolished
xxxxxxx
Now give your interpretation
to my tone
stick it deep
as do bones
unscathed
you shall vanish
Any takers
welcome here
NOTE
This version of
Lovedlu
has been inspired by a poet
asking me to read his version
on Valentine
14 Feb 2018
CREATIVITY- CUM -BREVITY
Comments
Your lines
Your lines
Are inspiring
The poem entices
To join you
On the flight
Of the rhythm and rhymes.
Your lines
Alienate Silence
Giving birth to new words
Lovelihood of my time
Is yours.
I am a bit tired.
I was climbing today.
Hands cannot type.
Fingers don't listen.
But my mind races into a free form
Of primordial freedom and fog
you are still creatively wonderful
I wonder if any one else will follow me too.. y
ou deserve it
let's see
you produce
a Lovedlu
would you....
RHYME nor reason
no, yes there must be rhythm
all is pure imagination
Like Honululu
LOL U
no takers for Lovedlu
I think I should stick to
sunku
and
my freestyle poetry
I only knew
Thanks to all for ignoring my
LOVEDLU