Dancing
Red roses
Through blue violets
Yellow
White tulips
Sway in the wind
Lovers
Holding hands
The setting sun.
Dancing
Red roses
Through blue violets
Yellow
White tulips
Sway in the wind
Lovers
Holding hands
The setting sun.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
You have painted a great
You have painted a great picture here Barbara in this Sunku..a pleasure read...I believe you are loving this form of poetry...
regards...
Yes I am
I having so much fun I writing about 10 a day as well as free verse
I am dancing with you, my
I am dancing with you, my friend.
Thanks IRiz
Glad you enjoying them
Hi Carolina girl
Trust you to devise such a great example on first try...kudos
Hey Stan
Hey