Ah!
Esker has left
may be I will go
soonly
one never knows
The age is not the leader
but the mind is
so stay as long
as you will
ABIDE WITH ME STILL!
Time alone one day
each one of us kill
But none will know
nor ever did
when 'tis
Ah!
Esker has left
may be I will go
soonly
one never knows
The age is not the leader
but the mind is
so stay as long
as you will
ABIDE WITH ME STILL!
Time alone one day
each one of us kill
But none will know
nor ever did
when 'tis
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
Just live each day, and thank whoever you find that you believe gave you another day.
Stop all this am I next rubbish, and start to write good poetry, I have asked Jess to start a progressive workshop, starting from the basic poetry, and as he carries on he will with help progress to the best there is, who he takes with him or those that choose to stay with him will attain the best there can be.
Even a chef has to learn to boil water before he becomes a master.
There are many things you can do to help as the workshop diverges as the poets attain more levels.
Take care and don't dwell in yesterday it is a place for memories of all sorts,
Yours as always, Ian..
first retort Ian
in a million years
that to coming from you
my only well wisher
in neo
heck loved
after a person gets beyond child bearing years then nature is done with them and we are all then on borrowed time. So just be glad for each day..........stan
O SHUKS
We must
as say u Stan