raj
Jan 15, 2018
This poem is part of the contest:

January contest. Poetry in 2 forms

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Turning the Pages (January Contest)

While setting the calendar on the mantle
the past fades ever so slowly
I clutch hard on memories
till they too recede like low tide
leaving behind
pebbles and shells
scattered along the shores
some smooth some frayed
like memoirs etched
on pages of my diary
to be shelved

I'm startled from a reverie, when
the wind chimes,
church bells and crickets
strike the score of do re me
at the stroke of midnight....
(Part 1 ree verse)

Looking back is history
future holds the mystery
weeks, months remain the same
keep coming again and again

Nukes may rule the roost
while peace needs a boost
everyone knows that for sure
hope this year holds some cure

Pages of my diary are craving for the ink
will it be less of grey and more of pink?
time has now come to refill my pen
with more of hope and less of pain
(Part 2 Structured Western)

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I have tidied up very few lines, rather words here, no major editing..

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

S

Good adherence to contest parameters. See, trying a different form didn't hurt Too much lol. Good luck in contest.....stan

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Many thanks for the read and offer. I will let you know as soon as I open a facebook account..

Gratefully..