Your memory is a serenade.
The melody settles
in my heart. Swaying.
Waiting for the next day it touches my soul
Again.
Jan 06, 2018
Reminiscing You
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A person’s memory lives on in your heart even after they have disappear from view, no matter how much time passes.
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Comments
Perfect poem.
Memories are good to keep and hard to forget, it's a nice one thanks for sharing your memory with us.
very nice poem indeed
love the melody settling in the heart. Nice words, nice thoughts.