Greenhouse Effect

To me
You are
The heating sun,
Giver of life,
Shower of warmth.

I am
To you
The iceberg
Melting.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Manila, PHL

Favorite Poets: R.S. Thomas

I'm glad you liked this one. I've been trying hard to come up with short, concise pieces.