OriginalRhyku
Nov 24, 2017

E-motion

When you feel askew
wait and perform a review
to succeed anew.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Success follows perseverance

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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Comments

Gunnar Hedlund

Gunnar Hedlund

7 years 5 months ago

...and there let it rest.
least that's what i've have averred
had i chance to eye this before
publishing.

it's as forced and as faked as every breath DT takes.

i've a great book for sale on e-bay, outlining the pleasures
of origami.

voile!

O

Thanks for your honest review. I respect your right to your opinion.

Just a small correction - I think you meant to write voila, not voile.

voile
noun meaning: a thin, semi-transparent fabric of cotton, wool, or silk.

voila
exclamation meaning: there it is; there you are (French origin)