Death

My heart breaks through the outer walls of my body and shatters, in my hands.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Experimenting with writing one-line poems

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

Comments

hi poetess

what a wonderful minimalism. I think it's great that you are getting so much meaning and physical energy in so few words.

Soon you will be putting these types of lines together and making very intense and passionate works. This I'm looking forward to indeed!