lovedly
lovedly
May 09, 2017

Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus

Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus 1962.....201.......

I aaaaaahhhh...chooed
150 times
nonstop that night

My dad
who was perhaps seemingly then alive
he asked me if I was practicing for
an aachhhoing race

I acchoed again

Later till today
they, docs say

ALLERGIC Rhinitis since long
Oh nuts
my nose never bleeds
it only weeps
tears of glory
that's why no one kisses me
that's another miserable
saddened story
Aachhhoee

When I married
I achhhoed at the wedding
yes mine not yours
all laffed
as if 'twere a prank
all aaahchooed along with me
and
a song took birth
want to hear it

Achhhoooooo
That's all 'twas to it
repeated 170 times
now by 300 in a row

ACHHHOOOOOOO!!!!!
here we go...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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lovedly

know each well enough
thanks have already paid my dues
jerry
bells are still ringing
your poetry is exquisite
as white as is
SNOW
but I still prefer snow -balls
all play with kids mostly
come over and see