lou
lou
Jan 31, 2011

Kill

Kill

Skulking in the undergrowth
Violation fills your eyes.
Dirty putrid heart breaker.

Over taking all that was good
Contaminating with your lies,
Oozing Immorality and disdain,

Invading, only death remains,
kill.

Squirming, author of my pain,
kill.

You project your filth
And deal the losing cards
You are the sinner

But we will overcome
Your clutches, your petty tyranny
You’ll lose at last

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

lou

lou

14 years 3 months ago

thanks shirl

lou

K

Lou, I think it's time to print out 10 or 20 of your last poems and put them side by side, read them and see what you honestly think and try to get out of yourself long enough to see them with new eyes.... it's not for me to critique. It's in your hands now.

~A

KINGZOMBIE

I agree this post holds a lot of power within its lines.I guess I just don't see with the same eyes as some on here.