The bait is ready
Weather finally steady
Wait over heady
Dec 01, 2016
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
The bait is ready
Weather finally steady
Wait over heady
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
From the last few reads of yours
it seems to me you need to broaden your poetic horizons.
No need to trap yourself in form.
Clear horizon
Good advice