Crooked is the crime
Straight to jail to serve the time
Full Circle is prime
Nov 14, 2016
Just Is Due:
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Crooked is the crime
Straight to jail to serve the time
Full Circle is prime
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Reads like...
an exercise. ~ Geezer.
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Hey Rhyku,
I follow the first two lines of this, but I don't understand what you mean by the final line. What is coming full circle here? Justice?
I hope you will return to the site and get active! I've been wanting to learn more about why you are interested in the rhyming haiku and what knowledge you could contribute to the community.
Kelsey
Geezer, Kelsey
Yes, an exercise in karma - there is a time when the past catches up to the present leading to a future linked to the past.