Model Mavericks:

Ingenuity
Benefits humanity
For posterity

Last Few Words: Idealists, Ideas, Inventors, Inventions, Intellectuals, Insights

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

I agree!!!

always, Cat

If I understand your critiques correctly, it seems the drama is lost in the panorama.