loved
loved
Jan 27, 2011

Love Is Music

Love Is Music

Love shouldn’t be shown
But seen
Everyone who’s in love
Knows what it means

The silence
The simplicity
Warmth of a palm,
A quiet caress,
A sweet smile
Upon the harp
of a loving heart
Can place a song
Worth a million
Incomparable...
As the sweetest sounds are heard
In reverberation
Does it appear?
Like the loveliest tune
Abide With Me!
How wondrous

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

weirdelf

and I know why it was there. No-one else had the courage to tell you it is trite and cliched.

Loved, you do come up with original gems. This isn't one of them.

loved

loved

13 years 4 months ago

Gems are rare
And
From my embalmed mind
One in a million
I guess.
I do accept....
That you will someday,
Teach me the magnificent art
And mould my heart,
Twill be a part of thy creativity Jess,
You now know,
How I play my part.