Awakened, startled late at night
by a strange and sudden sound.
An airplane crash? A chainsaw roaring?
Full wakefulness disspells all fright
for it's only Susan snoring.
Mar 08, 2016
Startled
About This Poem
Last Few Words: For some reason my better half sees little humor in this one lol.......
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Stan
Now you are in trouble, and not even a poetic theme just a protest of amnesic proportions lol,
You may have to go and have your body mended several times before forgiveness is given.
Another of our poets taken to their bed, but I guess your bed will be in the Dog house lol,
Take care both and try to enjoy , Makes me smile as I wend my way to another snore zone,
Yours as always Ian
ROTFLMAO---!!!
lol
It has actually become comforting to wake up at night and hear her sawing logs . Of course there Are times when she bulldozes them lmao........stan
save ur skin
Stan
she may saw it by her loud snoring
I am the ONLY record holder on snores
no one can challenge me
at times my snores too
awaken me
can you hear me snoring !
I
No NOT snore regardless what Susan might claim. The mirror cracked on its own and the dishes rattled off the shelves for a Unknown reason lmsao...........stan
Stan
Now we know why the Atlantic Ocean has so many waves especially when the Americas are asleep..
La La
Has she slapped you yet lmfao
Has she slapped you yet lmfao !!
beautifully funny poem for your loves snoring !!
enjoyed it and its a nice high note to go to bed on
love always Sis xxx
Not yet
But there Are occasional "I'm asleep and "accidentally" kicked you episodes lol. Still can't understand why she doesn't see the humor in this scribble........stan