Rula
Rula
Oct 22, 2015

Ah, atrocity!!

to modify the scene
I'd crop the swine
I'd always photoshop
for a cleaner Palestine

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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alidzain

Short and yet the message speaks out loudly.

Priceless blood of your men,
Stained the holy ground here
Sing the song of joy, dear
Blessed be them in glory!
Souls departing, heavens waiting.

Alid

R

raj

9 years 6 months ago

Good change in Title Rula. I note you are beginning to express more and more about your love and pride about Palestine...

Regards,