to modify the scene
I'd crop the swine
I'd always photoshop
for a cleaner Palestine
Oct 22, 2015
Ah, atrocity!!
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Salam, Rula
Short and yet the message speaks out loudly.
Priceless blood of your men,
Stained the holy ground here
Sing the song of joy, dear
Blessed be them in glory!
Souls departing, heavens waiting.
Alid
Thank you Khalid
for the encouraging words.
Good change in Title Rula. I
Good change in Title Rula. I note you are beginning to express more and more about your love and pride about Palestine...
Regards,
Thank you raj
for your visit and the comment.