docmaverick
docmaverick
Jan 12, 2011

So, I Digress.

Some things are difficult, if not impossible to put into words
because, believe you, me...I've tried.

No language is that "perfect",
no slang that "complete",
and no feeling that "opaque";

yet, still we try...
..but, to no avail.

For, we attempt to say the words, and phrases clearly;
but, what the other hears...

..are the ambiguous "inflections" of voice,
the misleading "cadences" of attitude, and demeanor;
and the possible irritation, or embarrassment "stemming" from a delicate topic.

The more personal the message,
the more difficult the code.

If, too many "empty words" accompany the meaning,
the feeling is lost.

Not enough compassion,
no understanding;

too many agressive reactions, or "stalls",
and timing, and momentum will cease;

all because, we either try to say what we think they want to hear,
instead of what we need to say;

or because, the other reads into, or misinterprets how,
the dialogue was addressed;

either way, it's a sad, sad state of affairs...
..for, in my heart of hearts,

I truly believed that, this time around
we'd be above that.....even, be on the "same page";

that "triteness" has unfairly,
watered down my meaning;

singularly,
disintegrated my intent;

and has solely put me at,
a "loss for words"...

..so, I digress.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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Comments

K

Shall I digress by bowing?

Thank you.

~A

May I post this to some of my groups, including a poetry one, if so, what name?

~A

K

a propos, aggressive has 2 g's.

I changed it when I posted it.

I really didn't study forms, just poets/poems in Gerald Stern's poetry class in 1978, NJ. So whatever I've learned I've learned in the last few years, much here, thanks to Neopoet, Brian and Jonathan.

~A

S

I can't believe I've been used in the same sentence with Anna as an authority on free verse lol. You must have done very well for~A to ask your permission to repost though.The only change I'd suggest is in L-19 : too many aggressive reactions. I do know to have conveyed the many messages in here would be very difficult to put in a classic write of equal length..............................scribbler

docmaverick

..thanx for stating how you feel but, I gotta say.....there may be others, as well that, may dissagree.....as do I. You have repeatedly proven to us all, that you posess a wealth of knowledge to share, on any topic in poetry.....and, I officially thank you.
take care,
dave.