Can I stop
to listen -
I mean really listen
to the stillness of breath
Can I look -
I mean really look
at the swaying silhouettes of trees
choreographed
on the walls of my mind
Can I summon -
I mean really summon
enough energy, patience
and strength
to swim out against the surging
tides
of quotidian concerns
and sensual proclivities
in order to
deconstruct
detoxify
and demystify
the language
of silence
frozen into icicles
Time has melted
and droplets of fire
burn tapestries
on my forehead
while the papyrus
of my consciousness
is being steadily
written upon
Once accomplished
the stylus will fall
into stasis
Aug 13, 2014
THE REPRIEVE
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hi Leonard
This is very good. I like how you made the flow pause at point of change
Thanks Barbara
for the analytic comment.
Yes, I have just been lazy to give it enough thought but I shall definitely make an effort. The trouble with this format is it is difficult to stick to the syllable count.
Cheers
Leonard
Yea it takes a little work and effort. We'll help with the count.