lovedly
lovedly
Aug 11, 2014

see but be not at sea

Perhaps as it seems

we shall have to go
ahead of thee
to welcome yee
into the folds of eternity
where you will not be
found as wanting

the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and fellowmen
I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth
are more heavenly.....

you may not be as happy
when in the arms
of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you all do know it...

so stay as long as you can
recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!
remain happy and friendly

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Rula

Rula

10 years 8 months ago

How happy we shall be is always determined of how good
are your deeds.
but those are only my beliefs

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 8 months ago

One of your better pieces,
see/sea it was really good to be part of our family.
Yours Ian.T

lovedly

alone constitute my family
jess has gone with the wind i see
raj is in Canada enjoying Chinese feed
who else and yes
Alid is busy....
with his own poetry
EXPLORATORY!