lovedly
lovedly
Jul 12, 2014

hear me out! can you?

if you want to ensure
the thrill of your poetry does remain
go visit the

UNDISCOVERED LIST

AND

read as many as you can
again and again
comment on them
now that's the game

then only some one may help you
in the thrill in you to remain
okay retain,

that's all about poetry
my dear,
you read me ten times
I may once

hope you do hear!
unlike me
my dear...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 9 months ago

I came
I saw
I commented,
The words sound familiar cant think from where, good thought though, it is a pity eyes cannot see these words and transmit to the brains..
Take care young Bard Yours Ian.T

lovedly

one great observation
guys and gals
have little capacity to do more
than tick
''LIKE''
they don't know what they do
except like millions across the globe

clapped

as Germany won the world cup
football hope u did see

read me on with glee
be happy
a miniature bard
that I still be
for Ian thee!