the ultimate design

This piece is a duplicate of your comment on the Imagination poem I put on stream yesterday, come on now lets write something new that will be of value, the repeat of comments as a poem is a little lazy bones,
Yours Ian.T

worse you can be accused of self-canibalisation and self plagiarism. This is lazy and another example of your your petulant attention-seeking behaviour.

Your behaviour lacks dignity and is embarrassing to yourself and others.

But let's look at the poem.-

the ultimate design

This is always on one’s mind....
where to consolation find

.'''Where to go with you today
Your house or mine just fine....''anon...'''

as long as we both entwine
that is the ultimate desire divine [nice line]
to swim in your ravines
and let [your] rivers flow from mine
to and within thine [I've tried to suggest before that your use of archaisms like "thine" is at best ineffective, at worst bloody pretentious]
ere the summer ends
and we forget the golden mine
where then together we ought to dine
reverberating thoughts of the ultimate design

your velvety body
with a sandy hairy one of mine [oh! this is a very clever, evocative and subtle line!]
we all together embrace
then sip some red wine...

the finale must be remain [bad grammar- the finale must remain]
a memory of ecstasy
yours and mine...

A really nice poem, Loved, sorry you have to spoil it with your pre-adolescenct female fake coyness and sel-plagiarisation.