loved
loved
Feb 01, 2014

tis metaphorical poetry

Each one of us is an identity
what a pity
we all are so different
and
have a different poetic inference

what of metaphorical notion
poetry is partly autobiographical

and

mostly inspirational
metaphors are known but rarely used
most poetry is generally implied
we thank each other
for being poetic guides
as all enjoy the mental
plateau- tudunal rides

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 2 months ago

My heart was broken
As the light of my life
Was drowning in a sea of grief
A bubbly personality
Full of fire
Time was the thief here

The apple of my eye
Had a stench of failure
As she faded off to sleep
I was feeling so blue
A rollercoaster of emotion
Reeking of infidelity
I was so glad it was raining women
No good you fishing

I am not going to tell you anymore
Yours Sparrow ( ROTFLMAO )

Ian.T

As the piece I wrote was all meta what's its "The Reek" is to smell of infidelity, which I suppose means that it can be wrong, in that if you had a very close encounter you may smell of it lol.
Just up your street that explaination young Loved,
I think to Reek or not to Wreak that is the question,
Be it better to Smell than cause Havoc..
Have a lovely day out there where ever you are????
Yours as always Ian.T