As fuzzy clouds convene in the blue sky, Flames of passion burn with bliss nd ecstacy in my inner being nd as crisp chilly nd serene winds assuage the heavy heart of mine, A sentimental sensation of felicity rudderlessly arouses my stoical spirit. Fountain of hospitality Queen of ravishing beauty Beauty like the glow of the moon What eyes of glistening light radiation Before your presence, A poor slave of your beauty A migrant from the other side of time Searching, since time immemorial Just to see what a precious gem you are Now that I've beheld your beauty I will stay till the end of time... **inspired by the cathedral** ... twg...
Nov 17, 2013
FLATTERY
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I take full responsibility of this piece. This actually erupted from a free mind composition.It was composed out and for the fun of it.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
the title itself
warrants a comment
ever so marvelous
u r maiden entry indeed does flatter
we all must
to a dictionary refer
welcome i have no power to say
but shall hold your hands any way
as i love flattery more today
than i did yesterday
your comment
itself is an embodiment of a great piece of poetry...thanks anyway for the warm welcome
that's why I call myself
an off the cuff poet
welcome still
you will