Geezer
Geezer
Sep 18, 2013
This poem is part of the workshop:

The Bottom Line

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When I/ have fears/ that I/ may cease/ to be
I met/ a trv'ller/ from an/ an/tique land
Shall I/ com/pare thee to/ a sum/ers day?

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I think this is what you want? Oops, missed an m!

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Rula

Rula

11 years 7 months ago

Happy to see you could join .
 You should either use the capital letters for the stressed syllables or else choose the advanced form to make the stressed ones bold. I'll do one for you and you do the rest.Here you are

when I/ have fears/ that I/ may cease/ to be
 
looking for your work.  

wesley snow

Other than Rula's suggestion to use advanced formatting, it seems you have this, but I expected nothing less.