GARTERS RED
SILKEN
ONCE CARESSED
LAY LIMP
FROST COVERED
WHITE SKIN PEARLS
LANGOUR
VISIONLESS
WOUNDS BREATH
A VAPOR
SIPHONED
GALLOWS STEP
HOODED LIFE
STRETCHES THE ROPE TAUGHT
SEALED
GARTERS RED
SILKEN
ONCE CARESSED
LAY LIMP
FROST COVERED
WHITE SKIN PEARLS
LANGOUR
VISIONLESS
WOUNDS BREATH
A VAPOR
SIPHONED
GALLOWS STEP
HOODED LIFE
STRETCHES THE ROPE TAUGHT
SEALED
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
garishly good!!!
like lip gloss dragged down a tile wall
..
my new twenty something muse reads "Fifty ................."
adjusts her neck chains to one long fine lenght of loops
to lace about her pale strong ankle and toe point..
(beginning to see why the ultra gathered youth
the artists and poets and promoters)
"frost covered" a fave line
thank you !