Linda Moses
Linda Moses
Jun 10, 2013

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Today I lost my friend, my husband
He went to sleep, and never returned

No time for goodbyes
Now only tears and sighs

Someone came and took him by the
hand, and carried him away before

the dawn of the day.Nothing left to say
except I will miss you my sweet love.

And hope to see you in my dreams.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats

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Rula

Rula

11 years 10 months ago

I hope this is not autobiographical. If it is I hope you'll be able to overcome the sad emotions and the void that you might feel for losing such a friend.
I played here a little with the line-break where I thought it might give a better read.

Today I lost my friend, my husband
He went to sleep, and never returned
No time for goodbyes
Now only tears and sighs

Someone came and took him by
the hand, and carried him away before
the dawn of the day.Nothing left to say
except I will miss you my sweet love,
And hope to see you in my dreams.

Linda Moses

Yes, my husband did pass away.I found him in the morning . He was already gone. nothing I could do tp help him I like the rearrangement of the words....... when Ifeel better I will change my wirte thank you, Llinda

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

Just know that we are there with you,
never be alone, there are too many near,
Yours Ian.T xx