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excuse me...i faced formatting probles..i shall repost

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Fabulous my dear
Very new to me such style of writing '' not the form''.
and amazed me too

i just posted the corrected version "The Call"....

Happy New Year to you and your beloveds..