The wind is roaming
while my thoughts are imprisoned
in the gentle rain.
May 21, 2013
Imprisoned Thoughts
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
The wind is roaming
while my thoughts are imprisoned
in the gentle rain.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
An excellent Senyru, that encompasses feelings and nature as an example, though I can never think of your thoughts being imprisoned..
Yours as always, Ian.T
Thanks Ian
A nice compliment. I need it :)
I am happy you like it.