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May 05, 2013

dying breed

the sunsets each day
be far or nearby
can't say
but tis always rising some way
like-wise poets read…
but to comment
shy away

not many like a pair
for so long do stay
as we two safely
with words only play

it needs courage by the way
on every pedestal
you can't place a statue
like one of you
anda bard combined
can you…..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

I miss your poetry, this is one that is wanting attention from others, that you might just as well howl at the moon.
So if we take the others out of the equation then we can get down to writing great poetry with a little direction from the Masters lol,
Yours Ian.T