loved
loved
Apr 24, 2013

tomorrow came

poets final resort!
this singular site tis
of the world's best

here self styled poets
self mutually praise
double their comment

those like you and I
we finally lament.

don’t be amazed
Ii’s not like other sites
where they only praise
money you do so raise.

you have to read a lot friend

don’t leave with tears
towards the end
as tears can be discomforting too
then don't say
no one warned you

none the less
a happy innings
my new friend
to you too!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

Your friends will come and go
But your words will last awhile you know.
Yet we can self praise as it is good
No matter if we are not understood,
The theme needs expanding and some of the lines need attention,
Yours Ian.T