Geremia
Geremia
Apr 07, 2013

M0RNING WAYS

MORNING WAYS

When shadows gray
and blue melancholy
cross my brow
as morning strikes
and I awake
I wonder how
many ways
I can break
this evil spell

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Country/Region: USA

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Ian.T

A piece of awe,.
That you wake is a blessing, it means that you still have much to do, just ask what the tasks are, but maybe you already know the things you have to do..
A Good write glad that you awoke to a new day, Yours Ian.T

Bonitaj

another 'soulful' write from you. You always capture the mood so well!
Regards

loved

yesterday
i composed a wonderful poetry
on tomorrow will come
but sad to say
you may or may not stay etc

i forgot to save it
they rushed me mad
i'd forgotten the title even
now you remind me
i shall recompose
twill come back to me
thanks Gerie

weirdelf

A perfect piece of verse, not a word of excess or out of place. In just nine lines and twenty six words you present feeling with imagery, dilemma and hope. Quite extraordinary.