Saying good-bye to a friend
can sometimes seem unfair,
one tries to express things
showing they really care.
So I’m tackling this task
even though it’s quite rough,
I won’t say, “good-bye”
but, I wish you enough.
I wish you enough sunlight
to lessen your pain,
and to enjoy the sun’s grace
I wish you enough rain;
I wish you enough happiness
so you’ll enjoy every mile,
with just enough sadness
to appreciate a smile;
to satisfy your “wants”
I wish you enough “gain”,
and I wish you enough, “hellos”
for when “good-byes” just remain;
we make friends in a minute,
within an hour, know they’re true,
so, it only took me a day
to know, I’ll never forget you !
Comments
Should second stanza read
one tries to express things
that shows that one cares?
Otherwise nice thoughts especially
to satisfy your “wants”
I wish you enough “gain”,
Soo happy, frenchy....
...this caught your keen eye. You're correct, you know. About the 2nd stanza, but I wanted not to have care be a plural, nes 'pa? I DID try to "fix it", though; what say you, now?
Thanx, again;
doc.
Hauntingly
brilliant write.
Absorbing.
Namaste,
Lenny
I really appreciate you, l of c....
...for your generous remarks. Made my day, sir.
Sincerely,
than, for that;
doc