moms love

I think i shall also abandon poetry
and
write plain and simple prose
so many poems
on mothers did I compose
many were better than prose
as sentiments for mothers... we... can only convey
once in a life's unique way

as nothing on earth can replace a mother
why...
because only she does lifelong bother
to be with us all our lives

mothers love comes before wives
even after she has left

Oh my gosh
what a surprise

so for a mother's love
praise
in a standing ovation all rise...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

I love my mother too

Who doesn't? Just curious. My brothers had mixed love hate. Standing ovation for all mothers. lovely

Wellall I can say is

thanks in capitals

I'm working on a mother poem

I'm working on a mother poem at the moment. Being one, I want unconditional love/ having had one, I'm not so sure.

As time passes

All the supposed wrong they did fades into the background and only the good is remembered

you are that mother

I'd love to have
All the best

Adoption

If you are young enough and I am old enough for you to be my natural born child xxx

perhaps

as you mayn't know
the number of dawns
I have scored ,

maybe it could be the other way around ..
anyway ...
its kind of you
to have respected mothers true .

I am an actor of poetry
I get into the garb
of anyone who so desires
to extract ...
an emotion ...
no motion

Love Jc xxx