One way to get back in the swing

There was a poet whose work
Caused his readers great irk
But now he has joy
By the quite simple ploy
Of critiquing just like a jerk

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics

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Glad to see your poems. They are a work of Art. Hope all is well with you.
My friend.

Simply = simple, maybe?

Still laughing!

well spotted.
Fixed

That's a mischievous piece...glad to see you've still "got it!"...

(Hug) Ells x

Sometimes harsh, sometimes kind, but always honest.

is YOU!

unless it's bad.

million perscent
honest.

Honesty free the soul of desert mirages in poetic writings.