He promised me ecstasy
I got sausage and chips
He promised me kisses twee
too short on my lips
He got down on one knee
couldn't get up with his hips
he promised me he was free
my ear his girl clips
Nov 10, 2012
Promises
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Comments
Quite enjoyed the humour...
Hi,
Quite enjoyed the humour in lines 1-6. Line 7 was the denouement...but I just don't get like 8!...LOL
'Betty'
Quite enjoyed the humour...
Hi,
Quite enjoyed the humour in lines 1-6. Line 7 was the denouement...but I just don't get like 8!...LOL
'Betty'
Hi Betty glad u enjoyed the
Hi Betty glad u enjoyed the humour in this little one x
A friend of mine slept with another friend of mine
She abused my, as if I made them do it!
She said "I expected sushi and got hamburger"
Sex is stupid. Unless it is very very good.
I loved this poem and look forward to more of yours.
Hi thanks so much glad u
Hi thanks so much glad u liked this little one all the best x