Sundial

Before time,
as we have come
to know it

a shadow
pinpointed
not only the hour
but the direction
of our destiny.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Goodnight Mrs. Calabash, wherever you are.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

Comments

sundial

I think the title very apt, However the body of the poem seems to extend far beyond the message contained. I would suggest a shorter version to add to the impact LMAO................scribbler

Stan,

I have missed your wit.

I guess this new format will take some getting used to.

Sue

Niiice!

p.s. Please forgive me my penchant for florid mispelings.