ABOUT HEARTS AND CLOCKS

Beats of the heart
tick tock like a clock
and mesmerized
we sway
to the rhythm of each day.
as the years move on
we fall behind
and all too quickly
we slowly fade away.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

Dearest Joe

I want more lol I really liked what you have here, I dont have any suggestions for the above I felt its complete for now but if I was you I would consider making more of this poem ... kudos

love and hugs your Jayne-Chloe xxx

My poetry has becme very

My poetry has becme very short. fgure t hat the less wrte the less trouble I wll get nto LOL

I have a book publishedd AMAZON KNDLE ettled "When all the walls colme tumbling down" nder the name LONGO-GEREMIA

I am housebound now, my Jane, mostly in wheel chair, constant pain. But writng makes my days easier.ANDI AM STILL A GDDDAMN HANDSOME HUNK at 70 .

Love t you, my Jane.

Giggle

I am just a greedy cow I always want more of a good story or poem :)

I will look your book up !! congratulations !!

I am sorry to hear your house bound my friend if you ever get bored just email me I am still a night owl ill message you my email address if you dont still have it

much love your Jayne xxx