The Distant cry
is actually from within
the desire to sweep the past
the sunrise may come fast
and
wipe off the sweat of my brow
let flowers reek, perfume somehow
red, crimson and blue
let the times tolls be due
and
forget the loathe some
of a long distant occurrence
demise of thoughts of desperation
what ahead, does lie,
we hope to see from a closer distance
that's why dreams are the manifestations
of things gone astray
may the Lord
show you the right way.
i cheated - early
my edit xxx
the distant cry (as title)
from within
desire to sweep the past
will sunrise’s fast arrival
to
let the time’s tolls be due
let flowers reek, perfume somehow
red, crimson and blue
wipe the sweat of my brow
forget the loathe-some
of a long distant occurrence
with demise of thoughts of desperate dreams
manifestations
of things gone astray
love judy
xxx.
You are permitted to.within limits if as a nurse you can view
the inners...hahaha
which others are forbidden....
hence my lovely salutations,
to my future friend
Who shall help
convey my contains
to another world outside
which to traverse
yet remains.
The distant cry
from within
desire to sweep the past
will sunrise’s fast arrival..............WILL OR WITH?
to
let the time’s tolls be due
let flowers reek, perfume somehow
red, crimson and blue
wipe the sweat of my brow
forget the loathe-some
of a long distant occurrence
with demise of thoughts of desperate dreams
manifestations
of things gone astray
IS IT BETTER NOW???
will
as in wish
yes - i love it now, but that's just me you know
xxxx
I have posted it in stream as
with
let's see if some one critiques
thanks still
please comment there
if you will !